Open Post to Peer Reviewers (final project)

For this post, I'll be discussing my final project and it's weaknesses and successes.

Author Response

Explain, with some specificity, your thoughts and feelings about the following:
Key information about your particular project that you would like anyone who peer reviews your draft to know

I don't love my video essay, I think reflecting in a video is slightly corny, but I get my points across.

Major issues or weaknesses in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those weaknesses)

I think my beginning is slow and takes a little bit of time to get into my thesis... I don't like how close I was to the camera either and my expressions come off slightly corny like I said earlier, but oh well

Major virtues or strengths in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those strengths)

Strength I guess would be my honest feelings and I think the passion is easily identified

Rough Cut:

Final Video Project on Vimeo (password is english109h)

2nd link, google drive video upload